Bonjour, vous pouvez corriger mes erreurs s’il vous plaît ? Merci d’avance Hello so let's talk about Nick and Rachel Forbes. Nick is 17 he still lives with his
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Bonjour, vous pouvez corriger mes erreurs s’il vous plaît ? Merci d’avance
Hello so let's talk about Nick and Rachel Forbes. Nick is 17 he still lives with his parents with his 2 sister, he studies kickboxing inpractise it every day, he plays saxophone and he is quite a good musician. We are now talking about Rachel Forbes she is 18 years old so 1 year old that Nick hasnjust left school she works as a volunteer in the hospital radio station It is ambition to become a children TV presenter or a radio brodcaster
Hello so let's talk about Nick and Rachel Forbes. Nick is 17 he still lives with his parents with his 2 sister, he studies kickboxing inpractise it every day, he plays saxophone and he is quite a good musician. We are now talking about Rachel Forbes she is 18 years old so 1 year old that Nick hasnjust left school she works as a volunteer in the hospital radio station It is ambition to become a children TV presenter or a radio brodcaster
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1. Réponse boucennasandriowbcv7
Bonjour
with his parents and his 2 sisters.
And practice it everyday
1 year older than nick
Her ambition is to become
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2. Réponse kim65
Hello so let's talk about Nick and Rachel Forbes. Nick is 17, he still lives with his parents and his 2 sister, he studies kickboxing inpractise it every day, he plays saxophone and he is quite a good musician. We are now talking about Rachel Forbes she is 18 years old, so 1 year old that Nick and has just left school. She works as a volunteer in the hospital radio station. It is an ambition to become a children TV presenter or a radio brodcaster.
(J’ai corrigé quelques fautes, il suffit juste qu e tu copies et que tu colles. Je te conseille quand même de comparer ton ancien texte et le nouveau afin de comprendre tes erreurs)